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Seven ways to improve your day.

Seven is one of my absolute favourite numbers. So crooked and threatening. It could be a crow bar. It could be Greek.I’m told it has mathematical significance. All the mathematicians get excited about the seven deadly sins for different reasons than the rest of us. Also those of a biblical sway have things to say on the matter, like the seven days of Genesis and those aforementioned sins and the Seven Spirits of God in Revelation.

Here are seven things that help the holidays:

7.i Start using some almost-lost words, like deliciate [to indulge and delight one's self] or brabble [to argue over petty things]. Both terribly   appropriate for Christmas.

7.ii Reading this poem by Grace Andreacchi in >kill author, of wrestling and love.

7.iii Bathe your eyes in these photos from Google Street View. Actually amazing. The artist, Jon Rafman writes about the process of the photo essay here.

7.vi Eat some cheese, that always helps.

7.v Discover the sadly defunct writer’s bloc magazine. Most stunning online lit mag I’ve ever seen. So gorgeous… I love the anatomy idea.

7.vi Look at this! This is a very good poem:

C.P. Cavafy ‘When They Come Alive’

Try to keep them, poet,
those erotic visions of yours,
however few of them there are that can be stilled.
Put them, half-hidden, in your lines.
Try to hold them, poet,
when they come alive in your mind
at night or in the brightness of noon.

7.vii Make out with someone. Because making out is great:


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Ars Poetica #5: Bernard O’Donoghue’s communal writing

I’m stuck in Atlanta for an extra few days because Heathrow is undergoing some kind of snowpocalypse. So I may not get home for Christmas, but I’m not going to think about that. I’m going to think about people because that’s pretty much what everything boils down to at some point.

More importantly, the connections between people. Collaboration is something I’ve been thinking about a lot recently. Ryan Van Winkle had some interesting things to say about the way he writes, and the idea of community (especially the wonderful Forest arts collective) was something he praised as an oppurtunity to learn wonderful things one wouldn’t otherwise be exposed to, a means of constructive criticism, and also a way to hardened your convictions (you only know how much you really feel about a poem when you have to defend it, perhaps).

Bernard O’Donoghue is one of the big guns of Irish poetry and currently positioned at Oxford University (plus on the syllabus for my Irish lit seminar next semester). His brief introductory essay to his 1995 collection, Gunpowder, lays out the central tenets of his approach to writing poems, the most significant being the relationship between the writer and community.

O’Donoghue likens poetry to traditional music, an analogy I rather like, saying:

Poetry, like traditional music, is a product of and a repayment to community

This description seems a much more positive slant on the kind of dynamic that Brian Cowen blunderingly described earlier this year at the inauguration of Harry Clifton as Ireland Professor of Poetry. However, to what extent can this statement survive the cultural weight is sets itself up for? Even within the small space of this essay, O’Donoghue succumbs to a language of violence that recasts this utopian ideal of conscious and subconscious collaboration between the poet and community. He admits that drawing upon the community for inspiration becomes an exploitation of sorts.

Of course, what is really questionable about the notion of any kind of community/poet dynamic is the existence of such defined groups and relationships. Partially, this feels more pertinent now, 15 years later, when globalisation and the spread of technology have torn down traditional concepts of community. And if you want to talk about the relationship that poets have to this phenomenon, I suggest asking Chris Emslie, who is knee deep in writing a thesis based on the idea that what unites contemporary poets (in Britain, at least) is individualism. Firstly though, and to avoid the narcissism that makes critics and readers automatically try and weave their own experience to any art, it is important to question just how solid the community that O’Donoghue is describing actually is. Irish communities in the 90s were fraught with tension.Community itself could almost be considered a negative word, with the sense of ‘belonging’ being utilised by militia forces to militarize. To belong to a community could translate to becoming another community’s target.

I would argue that O’Donoghue is really engaging in a kind of idealistic escapism here. The perfect dynamic he describes breaks down throughout the essay, with the nurturing symbiotic relationship he describes being taken over by his language of exploitation, and particularly ‘poaching’, that reflects the violence of Irish communities at the time. The sense of responsibility that O’Donoghue elucidates is a much more sinister issue, to me. I don’t want art to endure any sense of debt, but I have not immersed myself in a sociopolitical situation and used that for my poetry comparable to the Troubles. I don’t doubt that living in that context would make a writer want to soothe and speak for those he/she was living amongst

Inevitably when I read these kinds of manifestos on writing I reimagine them in terms of myself, or at least, my context. In this case, I definitely extrapolate some truth from O’Donoghue’s large scale comments. His community is much larger– a local society and a sense of history– but to me, the poet ‘as a licensed poacher, claiming a kind of ruthless poetic licence to draw on other people’s experiences’ makes sense in a personal way. I am guilty of culling my friends’ soundbytes for poems, often with a kind of secrecy that suggests the poacher.

Similarly, I’m a huge believer in the collaboration that occurs in workshops. And beyond the literal figures on community, isn’t all art collaborative? Half the work of the artist and half the work of the consumer? (My arithmetic is pretty weak, ratios are not exact…)


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Dear Bobby Jones, this is what I’ve done with your legacy:

I’ve finished half the academic year at Emory. Holy fuck.

The last 4 months have passed phenomenally fast. Being someone with a short and excitable attention span, much of this blur escapes me. But it has been awesome [and thanks to the board who chose me, and, err, sorry] for some of the following reasons:

  • Seeing drafts of Ted Hughes’ poems and Heaney’s and Longley’s correspondence
  • The unintentional civil rights road trip (Jackson / Selma / Montgomery). Seeing the Civil Rights Memorial.
  • Writing a poem about a jacuzzi. And the jacuzzi.
  • Seeing a bear in Biltmore Forest, NC
  • Drinking outside well into November.
  • Ending up in some amazingly fancy golf clubs that I simply do not belong in.
  • The free bars. Notably at the Stone Mountain Highland Games and in the owners box watching the Falcons vs Ravens
  • Learning about this whole ‘emotional honesty’ thing
  • Seeing a fuck ton of snow
  • More importantly, seeing dolphins at the beach in Panama City
  • And more hauntingly, seeing some very, very old strippers.

If you want to read some better and more illuminating end of year lists, these are some excellent ones to peruse:

Paste’s Best Covers of the year

Flavorpill’s Underrated Albums of 2010

Paul Muldoon’s round up of this year’s great poetry collections over at the New Yorker’s Book Bench

It’s been excellent. Thanks, Bobby.


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Why.

This is a shit post, sorry.

But I’ve been on an utter O’Hara binge recently. And this is running and running and running off my tongue:

As Planned — Frank O’Hara

After the first glass of vodka
you can accept just about anything
of life even your own mysteriousness
you think it is nice that a box
of matches is purple and brown and is called
La Petite and comes from Sweden
for they are words that you know and that
is all you know words not their feelings
or what they mean and you write because
you know them not because you understand them
because you don’t you are stupid and lazy
and will never be great but you do
what you know because what else is there?

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